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D.E.V.I. - Army version by peterku D.E.V.I. - Army version by peterku
I'v had busy summer this year so it was long time since I uploaded here on deviantart. But this week I've finished another concept of mine. Here it is.

Concept of sci-fi energy rifle.

Model is fully highpoly, rendered in Vray and some work in Photoshop. I did this concept in two version.

1. savage army camo (this one)

2. shiny black spec ops version. ([link])


P.S.
I'm available for freelancer jobs. If you want to make offer then I'm open for debate.

Tnx for comments if any. Bye.
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I really love the design of this rifle, with that in mind, I am going to try to write as an objective a review as possible.

On vision, I give full marks. This is a great design and very visually appealing. It has a utilitarian look and a few touches that would likely make this a joy to shoot and/or train with if it were a real design. The barrel gives enough length to make use of any intermediate cartridge in production today if it were ever designed for that. Since it is not, the only real question I have, is why add a suppressor to a weapon that does not use standard cartridges?

On Originality I, again, give full marks. The lines are clean and aggressive. The devil is in the details for a battle rifle, and the fact that you've included adjustable length-of-pull, suggests that you "get" the utilitarian aspect of a weapon. I was torn about giving docking you half a mark because I could not figure out if this rifle was cartridge based or not, but decided to give you full marks because of the things you did not include, which were a bunch of Picatinny rails and tons of accessories from mag-pul. Also, you went with an optic that looks to have been designed with seemless integration with the rifle.

On Technique, I gave four marks. Unfortunately, I'm not a master of computer design and, because of that, I am not qualified to really critique your cgi technique. That being said, I do have a background in photography. Your shadows are fantastic, and the way you've rendered it conveys a good understanding of how a product might be lit in real life. I docked you the one mark because in all of the detail insets you didn't show anything that would have been of interest to the end user. In the lower-left corner, you have what looks like a detail shot of what *could* be the gas-regulator system, but it's still not clear how this rifle functions. On the other two insets, I'm not quite sure what you're highlighting.

On impact, you again earn full marks. It is absolutely clear that this is a battle implement. Regardless of method of function, this image leaves no doubt that this is a purpose-built weapon. Great use of a subdued background with just enough texture to make it pop off the page.

I write this as a Soldier and a gun nut.
Thanks for a great design.
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thoughtengine Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
An uncluttered design that fits together well. I take it the barcode is the serial number?
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:iconroyex1:
royex1 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014
Amazing OMG 
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SajuukkuujaS Featured By Owner May 28, 2014
I take two, in navy blue with my fav name printed biig on them. xD

loove that desing.
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:iconpeterku:
peterku Featured By Owner May 29, 2014
:) tnx you.
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LouisTarado Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013
Awesome design, would love to see this in a game! I'd even like to see it take standard M-16 magazines in front of the grip and be a sweet little carbine!
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bnka Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome work !
Emm do not want to look like a jerk but I think you've made a mistake in the nake of a picture...
On a rifle it is D.E.W.I and on the picture name it is D.E.V.I
Obviously only one name is real... sorry if I'm wrong just pointing on that case if it is realy a simple mistake and you just hadnt seen it.
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:iconpeterku:
peterku Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
never mind. I make this kind of mistakes all the time :).
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:iconbnka:
bnka Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LOL ok :D
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Varvendale Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013
if i owned a big video game company i would make you my right hand man! :D
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:iconpeterku:
peterku Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013
so I'd do most work instead of you? ..... :)
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:iconvarvendale:
Varvendale Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013
i dnt get what your saying
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:iconpeterku:
peterku Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013
right hand person is man who always make the most and his boss is who always gets paid the most :)
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:iconvarvendale:
Varvendale Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013
well i was kind of useing it as a figure of speech xD
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darkendrage Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Student Digital Artist
for example this came out good but not as good as i would of liked. look at it if u want


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darkendrage Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Student Digital Artist
how do you texture like that i try my hardest when it comes to textureing but always dont come the way i want it. i use Maya 2012
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peterku Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012
hi. i'm not working with maya. Must be more specific in question about texturing. I just do it as anybody else. use diffuse, specular or bumb maps, etc...
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bigton Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012   Artist
Good Gravy Baby tap dancin' jesus! Beautiful!
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Dalviano Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You keep making me wanna write reviews and I keep telling myself not to badger the Slovakian man who makes 3DS Max guns in his past time. But my god, this looks amazing. I don't even care that I can't find the clip or the cocking handle, I just want that gun.
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kelbec Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
just came across this gun and Peterku i must say you have a natural talent, this is amazing. Second I would like to say to you dalviano, that this is an energy weapon thus doesn't need a normal clip. however the person who critiqued his spec ops version pointed out the power cell at the back of the gun just before the adjustable butt. Also with it being energy once the cell is in and the safety off its loaded no need for a cocking leaver. =) i agree with you however that this is an amazing gun and i too really want it.
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Dalviano Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I could understand that, yes, but I think that a suppressor on an energy weapon would be either redundant or impossible. Now, you're probably right about the energy clip on the back, which is why I try not to critique at four o'clock in the morning. As for the lack of a safety, yeah, its an overlook-able part of a gun, but if I were the proud owner of this gun, I'd sure as hell like to know that I can keep it by my bedside and have it fall over and not litter the room with a bunch of holes .556 m in diameter and have to explain to the folks across the street why they no longer have a cat. Or a window. And he's had it in all of the other weapons, so I've set a level of expectation and it has been met time after time.
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peterku Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012
tnx. dont affraid to criticize me. feel free to point out every mistakes. I always take it in positive ways...
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Shadowi Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
i really like it, the shape, the detail and especially the paint.... but what i start wondering about when i look at the pic is how does it actually work?? for example where is the battery/clip? how do you change it? i take it its the boxy thing at the shoudler support? and also wondering if the front end should be closed instead of open like it seems to be now? but still a really nice looking gun =P
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peterku Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012
tnx. I opend front to bring complexity. witout that it would be "empty" IMO.
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Shadowi Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
i understand that completly... after thinking about it i also agree it would have felt a bit empty, but then again it would have been safer/better for the gun in a way considering that all kind of crap wouldnt be able to enter =P
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peterku Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012
you know that with craps is true. but effective design is in most cases very simple (in any are not only in weaponry) and thats not chalenge in modeling ... :)
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Gunnut51 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
I want this! And I don't mean buying a print, because it won't satisfy me...

What does D.E.W.I. (or is it D.E.V.I.) stand for?
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peterku Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011
:). I have no idea. I just used 4 letters first came on my mind. and Devi means some god as well I think.
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ThePandoraComplex141 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
i think I'm in love
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peterku Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2011
:)
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NikitaTarsov Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
Also very very cool. The color is more "realistic" tha the stylish black version. Would think only a camouflage-version could be cooler...:giggle:
Only little difference: the handle looks not that fluid than in the view of the black one.
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peterku Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011
tnx. camouflage is great but it hides everything including shapes. then model is not visible properly. thats why I didnt you it.

bye.
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NikitaTarsov Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
Ow....even a just camouflage paint? Shard-style? So maybe it doesn´t changes the surface texture, just the color....
But i won´t to anoy - sorry:)
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NikitaTarsov Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
Ow....even a just camouflage paint? Shard-style? So maybe it doesn´t changes the surface texture, just the color....
But i won´t to anoy - sorry:)
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peterku Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011
no problem man.
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Naeran Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Hah, man. At first I thought it was a real photo of a crafted gun.
You're really good with that 3Ds-Max. :clap:
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peterku Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2011
from my viewpoint the best reaction is when people say they thought my work is photo. then I know I did good joob :) tnx mate.
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heinzcatsoup Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2011
holy s***, EXCELENT job mate... actualy looks like a real gun... where did u photographed this.. LOL really well done..amazing detail.. keep it up..
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peterku Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2011
tnx mate. most people prefer black version..
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MaraxxusEredexa Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dear god, that looks like one handsome gun.
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:iconpeterku:
peterku Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2011
tnx
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:iconj-h8983:
J-h8983 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2011  Student Filmographer
Wow, That is beautiful. I want one!
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:iconpeterku:
peterku Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2011
tnx. copy it :)
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:iconkayal97:
Kayal97 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2011
That one is better!
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Siegfried-Ukr Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Original weapon concept!!!
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:iconpeterku:
peterku Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2011
tnx you.
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Siegfried-Ukr Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome :)
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M3D13V4L Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice.
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Durza11 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
do you accept requests???
it's really more of an idea just in case you wanna make it but...
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:iconpeterku:
peterku Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2011
ok. if you have something then show me. if I find it interesting for modeling (its not same as interesting idea) then I bring it to 3d.
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Durza11 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
GREAT!
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